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I'll Send Them Me
There exists a large temple. Marble so pure and white.
There was need no need for candles or lanterns. For its Landlord emitted His own light.
One day a handsome man entered the temple, boldly and without shame.
This man had desire. This temple, not his own, to claim.
Approaching the Landlord, he began to boast,
"Today you have lost. I have corrupted what you love most."
The Landlord replied, "I have not lost, I have in fact won.
You believe you struck a blow, but you failed before this even begun."
"Wrong," the handsome man stated, "They now turn away.
If they refuse to believe in you, how can they stay?
You gave them this gift of free will
And with a little nudge they'll deny you still.
Sure a small portion may still trust.
But thanks to me most will be dust.
For I served you many a date,
Therefore I know how you operate.
To return to this temple, you ask one thing.
A sacrifice they must bring.
But they will always long to desert.
Forever they will bring you hurt.
Not one of them wil
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Literature
No More
Your art will always be terrible.
There will always be someone better than you.
Look, a child half your age did just that.
Eww. How could you create something so disgusting.
You should create
No more.
You might as well give up.
You might as well quit.
You might as well do nothing.
You will be an artist
No more.
Who could love such a intolerable smudge,
Who could bear such a feeble thought,
That someone like you could do more,
Than sit and dream and wallow.
You will dream
No more.
You are second rate.
You will achieve
No more.
No.
Why would I care how I fare,
To those who don't even know or care.
I am sick of your constant vile
Speech that smothers my smile.
You will bother me
No more.
You bring shadow where there should be light.
Within me you cause eternal fight.
You hover over my thoughts like a bad cold.
Determined to kill me until I am old.
You will haunt me
No more.
Why should I care what young kit create,
Why such lies do I allow you to berate.
Just because you know how far my cr
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Jonathan
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There exists a large temple. Marble so pure and white.
There was need no need for candles or lanterns. For its Landlord emitted His own light.
One day a handsome man entered the temple, boldly and without shame.
This man had desire. This temple, not his own, to claim.

Approaching the Landlord, he began to boast,
"Today you have lost. I have corrupted what you love most."

The Landlord replied, "I have not lost, I have in fact won.
You believe you struck a blow, but you failed before this even begun."

"Wrong," the handsome man stated, "They now turn away.
If they refuse to believe in you, how can they stay?
You gave them this gift of free will
And with a little nudge they'll deny you still.

Sure a small portion may still trust.
But thanks to me most will be dust.
For I served you many a date,
Therefore I know how you operate.

To return to this temple, you ask one thing.
A sacrifice they must bring.
But they will always long to desert.
Forever they will bring you hurt.

Not one of them will be pure.
How to undo my plan they will never be sure.
Ha! Who, in thier stead, could there possibly be?

The Landlord simply smiled, "I'll send them Me."
I should probably add my more recent work here. XD

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CharmingCrobat Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hello random deviant!
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bramblefire123 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Hello:)
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CharmingCrobat Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How are you?
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bramblefire123 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
ok:)
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